Y'know, I coulda swore I commented on this. Eh. Whoops. I do have a secret affection for Bluestreak and twin friend-fic interactions, and this is one of my favorites. :) I GIVE YOU INTERNET COOKIES, Y/N?

Whoa, shift key fun.

Author's Response: lol! Better late than never. And I *love* Internet Cookies. ^_^

-Snickers- Prime with a foot fetish. Nice.

Normally, I don't really care for AU stories, but you've pulled this one off rather nicely - interesting plot. The flying creatures remind me of the creatures in the film 'Pitch Black' - were they based off of those? Sorry, I just sort of thought of it halfway through the description.

Anywho, kudos to you.

Author's Response: Yes, they were~ I fell in love with the concept of that planet when I first saw the movie when it first came out on video, and I couldn\'t think of a worse place for them to be stranded. I took some creative liberties with the flying monsters though since those in the movie couldn\'t eat anything but flesh, and that\'s hardly a threat to our mechs.

Ah, Soundwave. Logical progression at its best.

I have to say, you have excellent timing. I had a craving for some Soundwave fic, and BAM. Cue ray of light and harps. Very nice. I liked how he rolled the possibilities through his mind, and, in a very in-character way, stepped aside for the betterment of Decepticon kind, and continuing his usual duties.

Anywho, kudos.

Pooooooooor Mirage. -pats- Still, he made out pretty well in the end.

... oh. Oh my. That was a pun. I hate myself now. Sigh.

Back to the original proverbial train of thought: nicely done. Very lonesome and sad at the beginning. Loved the description of Thundercracker/Skywarp interaction. And, of course, the mentioning that the 'cons aren't -entirely- bloodthirsty killers. Glee squared.

Anywho, kudos. -applauds-

Author's Response: :) lol thank you. i gotta do something to keep myself busy while waiting for ur new (and always awesome) fics :)

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Y'know... this is really weird, but that kinda makes sense, after a fashion. I'm not really sure why, it just -does-. XD

Nicely done. The conclusion was just fantastic. :P

Author's Response: Really?! It does?! Um... I mean... *cough* Of course it does. *shifty eyes* Thanks! I\'m glad you liked it. ^_^

Wow. That was... quite saddening. I loved the line about 'life that was not a life'. And Wheeljack's end bit was absolutely perfect.

Kudos. Sad kudos, but kudos all the same.

Author's Response: Thanks. I had my qualms about the theme of the story, so that feels reassuring.

... wait, why am I seeing Prime watching them stupidly from the sidelines? Gah. Out, Prime! Out I say!

Best part, Hound shrieking the 'You did this to me!' It drew forth giggles. Nice little moment, and, hey, any fic where Trailbreaker actually shows up and -speaks- is a good idea in my book.

Anywho, kudos, you posting fiend. XD

... Bumfuck Nebraska? Oh, my, tell me that's a real place.

Adorable-iffic story. Liked the fretting and the idea of Slingshot terf-darting.

Wow. Bluestreak finally gets to be actually blue... and his name changes. XD Poor him. I gotta say, I'm really curious as to where you're going with this.

And, yay, Oil Slick made his way into a fic. Flash-back, but still in one. :D

Author's Response: Oh yes, the irony bites, that\'s for certain! XD And I knew I had to use Oil Slick somehow from the moment I read his bio. He sounds badass (hopefully he\'ll make it on Season 3). As for where this is going... I guess I wanted to apply reason as to why Prowl was such a lousy team-worker at the beginning of the show. Feeling betrayed by someone he trusted with his life sounded as good a reason as any. *salutes* I hope you enjoy the rest of the story! Two chapters down, two more to go. :D

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I think... I think I might just love you. XD That was spot on! And there was Jetstorm! And Thrust! In character! Snarking! Glee! Jubilations! Exclaimation points!

Ahem. In short, abso-fragging-lutely perfect. Nicely done. :)

Author's Response: Heh! Keeping everyone in character is important to me, so I\'m happy to hear I got them right. I\'m glad you enjoyed it, thank you! :D

I just got this amazing mental image of all the bots crowded around this itsy bitsy machine in a dark room, totally absorbed in watching little balls whiz off to strike every unfit member (I'm thinking Slag in a leadership role - oh, yes) in the head. Thank you. :)

Very short, but, hey, it's to the point.

Author's Response:

You're very welcome. ;)

And thank you. I'm glad you liked it.